Monday, March 8, 2010

Learned lesson

The day i was with a couple of friends and they asked me if i wanted to go egging. I said yes of course, so as we were prancing down the road to a friend of ours we saw a cop. For a second we thought we was going to get caught but we hopped over a bush and hid. Once he passed we scooted across the street and started egging our friends house. The next day we got in trouble and learned are lessen.

Friday, January 22, 2010

Comma What?

My father had left our house in the midst of a fight between Lindsey and my mother. My mother was trying to get Lindsey to go with her to the Y to swim. Without thinking, Lindsey had blared, "I'd rather die!", at the top of her lungs. My father watched as my mother froze, then burst fleeing to their bedroom to wail behind the door. He quietly tucked his notebook in his jacket pocket, took the car keys off the hook by the back door, and snuck out.

Thursday, January 7, 2010

figuraative language

Figurative- representing by a figure or resemblance. Figure of speech- a form of expression used to convey meaning or heighten effect often by comparing or identifying one thing with another that has a meaning or connotation familiar to the reader or listener. Imagery- the product of image makers. trope- the use of a word or expression in a figurative sense. They all have something to do with speaking.

Monday, January 4, 2010

story spinners: option3


As I regained consciousness, I remember asking myself why was i in an alley at the middle of the night unconscious. As i began heading back up the alley to find where i was a heard a noise. The noise came from across the street, as i got closer and closer a car turned its headlights on and started towards me. It was a cop, he asked "where ya heading boy" with a scared look on my face i responded "ummm home sir". He shook his head and said "you better hurry up before it gets curfew, wouldn't want to get a ticket. After that i didn't have a clue where i was.
Being the stubborn guy that i am, i figured i could just find my way home on my own. Well that didn't happen exactly as i planed. All i could think about was how much trouble i was going to be in when i got home to my dad. I mean i couldn't blame anyone but myself for this happening. I was the one who snuck out to go see my girlfriend and forgot my phone.
As i was walking into a vestibule i finally saw someone who could maybe help me find my way back home. I went up to the lady and said "Miss do you think you could help me find my way back home i believe i am lost?" and the lady said "of course i would where do you live?" i live on 42nd and quaker. Well that about a mile up the road let me give you a lift. Thank you i would much appreciate that i said.
The lady was so sweet and kind, i was just so happy i was finally getting home. As we were driving back she was asking me what happened and why i didn't no where i was. I didn't want to lie to the lady, but i didn't want her knowing i snuck out to see my girlfriend. I said " well i was taking a walk and ended up going to far and then something happen that knocked me out, so i woke up in an alley not knowing where i was. She said "oh my gosh that is a scary thought, i hope you have learned your lesson". Oh i have and i thank you so much for helping me, and this its the brown bricked house on the right. While i was getting out she said "god bless."

Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Parts of speech

10 nouns patrick, adam, tyler, building, street, music, door, glass, house, goose

5 adjectives ugly, mean, silly, fat, short,

3 adverbs quickly, happily, scooted

2 conjunctions and, or

3 verbs walking, stop, jumped

2 prepositions above, in

1 interjection wow!

2 pronouns he, she



One day patrick, adam, and tyler were walking down the street going to a building and an ugly fat dog jumped out and scarred the crud out of them. When they saw how scary the dog was they moved quickly away from there. Once they reached there house the glass was broken. Patrick said "wow i cant believe this happened while we was gone" but at that time this fat short old lady scooted over towards us and she said "i just called the cops because i saw a person break in" at that time they heard the sirens coming closer to the house. When the cops showed up they walked up and said "Is there anything above or in your house?" Adam said "you silly goose there is no one or we would have already took care of them!" After the cops checked out the house and it was all clear they left and stayed at another house until there parents got off work.


Thursday, September 10, 2009

Bellringer

The kid goated about how great he was at football.

Wednesday, September 9, 2009

Friendship bellringer

I think friendship is more important to me because i like asking my friends for advice and not my family because some of the things i need help with i cant realy ask my family except my dad but he doesn't live here, but i think family is very important also.